The name of our utopia is Beach World. In this utopia we
have a philosophy of tolerance for people. We chose the name Beach World
because we wanted to live on the beach and be laid back. We thought a beach in
Italy would work for us.
Beach
Friday, October 19, 2012
Decleration of Independence
Beach World was created because society did us wrong. We the
people feel society was corrupted by bullying, war, poverty and no tolerance.
All attempts to fix these problems failed or is taking to long. We are
determined to make a utopia that is free of these corrupted ways.
In the society we lived in there were and still is many issues that include bullying. The law put in place to outlaw bullying we feel in not enforced as much as it should be. If it was in forced well there would be no bullying at all. In our society we will put a harsh punishment in place to make sure that there is no bullying. This is because we had so many issues with it in our old society. War was an issue that brought us to make this Utopian society. War was effecting us greatly. Families were separated and it was horrible. Poverty was another factor that brought us to this decision. In the current society poverty effects many people putting them in tough situations. In our society poverty would be eliminated because everyone would make equal amounts of money. Overall our utopia will have tolerance for everyone. In our society people will live a better life.
Wednesday, October 17, 2012
Utopian Animal
We chose the Clown Fish as our animal because they are family orientated, they are independent and finally they live in the ocean. That relates because our utopia is located on the beach.
List of Rules
1. No war- We want peace for everyone.
2. No bullying- Everyone needs to be happy.
3. No judging- Everyone needs to know that we are all equal no matter what the posses.
4. School for three hours and fifteen minutes for all people under the age of eighteen five days a week- People need to be educated but still have enough free time.
5. Necessities should be affordable for all people- This would make poverty disappear.
6.Tolerance for all religion- People should not be judged based on their beliefs.
7. Tolerance for all races- People should not be judged based on their ethnicity and origin.
8. Everyone is equal- This teaches people that having things is not something you build your life around.
9. People rights will be put first- This will keep peace between people and the government.
10. People will be punished for any rules broken- Limits should be known and the same for all people with no leeway.
Governing Body
The government will be a democracy. The four founders will first hold the title to a council. After the term is up four more people will be elected to take their places. To make decisions within our utopia the council will hold many meetings. During the meetings people who live in the utopia will be able to bring forth any issues or concerns they may have regarding anything with in the utopia. The issues or concerns will be voted upon immediately. If the vote is tied, the council will hold off and elect a fifth member to make the deciding vote. The verdict will be told at the next meeting. Meetings will be held every week so there is no wait on verdicts. This will give people a say in the government and it will keep the peace between the people and the government who runs the society.
Invitation to Friends
Dear Mom and Dad,
You guys should come to our utopia, Beach World. It’s a laid
back and accepting society. I think you
guys would love it here. We would get to
spend a lot more time together. It would
be great for our relationship. You wouldn’t
have to worry about me getting into trouble both because the schedule is
carefully planned out and I still get a chance to be carefree! So do you guys. You guys only have to work for four and a
half hours. Doesn’t that sound
great! I really hope you do come, it
would be so great! Hope to see you soon!
Love,
Carly.
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